Business growth beyond sales and marketing - Accelerate Business Group

If you read your copy - website, brochure, white paper, sales letter, etc. - and it doesn't quite create the level of excitement or interest you'd like your target audience to experience when read, there are a few things you can do:  hire a copywriter to write new copy, train to be a copywriter and improve your skills or have a copywriter look over your shoulder and give you tips and guidance on how to improve whatever you wrote. 

This service is the latter.

In summary, I'll review and comment on any sales or marketing copy you wish.  I won't rewrite your copy from scratch, but I'll give substantive comments, ideas, and suggestions to make it better and more actionable.  While I won't rewrite your copy, I'll most likely change a sentence here and there and won't hesitate to add a paragraph or two if needed.  

I'll read your copy looking for key ingredients proven to increase response rates and compel readers to act.  My review, comments, and input will be on ways to enhance these ingredients, resulting in an improvement to your copy and greater reader impact.

This service is an economical way to improve your copy and its ability to grow your business. The cost is $150 per page or 1000 words per URL.

Following is an example of the service and possibility of results you might achieve.

Here is what I was given to review.

Here is my review.

Here is the result (no emphasis added): "My response per letter last year was 3%. This year, due to your letter, I am getting an 11.5% response!! An increase of almost 400%!"

Bottom-line…The result of my review was a 400% increase in response as compared to previous mailings. The cost was a couple hundred dollars to purchase this service. The return was thousands of dollars in increased sales. No matter how you slice it…a great investment.

Here is the link to order this service. 

The first step is giving me some basic information on the copy you wish me to review and the upload of your copy.  The second step is a reroute to PayPal for payment.  Once I receive your copy and payment, I will acknowledge your oder with an email and give you an expectationon when you will receive my review.  Depending on my current workload, schedule, and size of your copy, I typically will get my review back to you within 48 hours.